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Limerick of Lament: Parting Really is Such Sweet Sorrow


You’ve heard about two peas in a pod,

That’s the way it is with Q and Rod.

Two boys who are friends

That will never end

Although one lives his life abroad.

.

Star Wars, Indiana Jones and Wii

On these things they will always agree

Although neither have a brother

They have each other

And would never turn down a trip to KFC!

.

It’s the last day to get their groove on

Cuz it’s time for Q to move on

No way to stay

He’s going away

Rod will miss him so much when he’s gone.

.

To keep this friendship intact

The boys will make each other a pact

Before Q leaves tonight.

They will just have to write

And never fall out of contact.

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Good bye, Q!

We will miss you!

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24 comments on “Limerick of Lament: Parting Really is Such Sweet Sorrow

  1. i got the goosebumps just at the thought of losing a friend ;(

  2. great! awesome for a rap!

  3. such tender words true friendships are hard to find and not easily let go of for a time…then again that kind of love really knows no distance but it sure doesn’t make it easier..what a wonderful tribute.

    • glad you enjoyed it. my son had me read it to him, over and over. then wanted me to write about him and Q some more. i told him he only gets one poem, but can have all the memories he wants. πŸ˜‰

  4. what lovely words about life, friendship….
    thank you for the inspirations and realizations!

  5. Wow. Great! Enjoyed reading it! πŸ™‚

  6. a sad little poem… but very nicely written… πŸ™‚

  7. Wow, i really like these limerics

  8. Such vivid imagination. I loved the feeling of this poem. Beautiful!! πŸ™‚

  9. That was a very sweet and promising poem…
    Thanks for a such a nice read.. I really like your style !

    Keep the awesomeness flowin’… Have a great July!

  10. Congratulations on winning the award πŸ™‚

  11. Hi,
    Thanks for visiting my blog, and for the kind comment. Your visit brought this wonderful blog of yours to my (short little span of) attention. I like the use of the limericks in the poem; I have never thought to try that. Very well done πŸ™‚

    Just Say’n

  12. lovely, touches the heart. parting is truly a sweet pang.

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  14. This reminds me of a friend i lost in a plane crush. Just that he went without a proper parting and never be back again. sweet sorrow, heh.

  15. Lovely, really lovely i can relate so much since my soul sister lives away from me and its hard yet such wonderful bond its actually ok for it to be that way…..

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